One day, the sun shone , and everyone listened to birds twittered in the morning. It was a beautiful and a nice weather. It was a spring time in the unique Island. Everyone preferred to walk around, to enjoy this weather, and these stunning views. Likewise, people wanted to hang out with their families and their friends. Therefore, most of them were interested to go to a park or to go to a forest because it is a good place for camping.
However, I had been in a wonderful land, and I met a real amusing girl. Anyway, my alarm went off and I realized that I had a dream. I lost everything “the land, the girl and my dream.” Then, I decided to go to the forest.
So, I went to a strange and murky forest. When I was walking inside the forest, I saw strawberry trees. They were the most awesome trees that I had seen in my life. However, something grasped my attention. there was an odd tree “it was a very red and a very skinny tree.” It was like a rose flower. Also, I wanted to take a picture with this tress, so I went to this tree. Furthermore, I was trying to touch the tree, and it started to scream. I got scared because I thought the tree couldn't scream, and the tree started to talk . I was surprised, and the tree told me “ don’t touch me.” I felt, I was in the dream , but the tree turned around , and it pushed me . “ make a guess “ he is my friend “ Carlos”
Hassan, Lots of great transitions and description in here. Good imagery with the "rose flower" tree, and I liked your surprise ending that the tree was "Carlos." Although, you know that I could have guessed that! I have corrected enough of your vocabulary quizzes to know that ending. Somehow, though, I am not sure that I picture Carlos as a "rose-flower tree." hmmmmm
ReplyDeleteYou have very creative adjectives in your story to support the imagery in the story. I am glad you took the time to type this story. Thank you for writing about strawberries :)
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